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[wrfm-mods.livejournal.com]

Refugees, we want this game to start off the new year right. And what better way to do that than to address the things that didn't go so well in the past and try to fix them while we can? So, that said, this is World Refugees: Final Mix's first official

~Critique Post~

Those of you from WR2 should know how this works. But since we've got some newer players who aren't familiar with the routine, we're gonna tell you how this works anyway.

1. Post a comment listing your characters, even if it's just yourself at the moment.
2. Wait for critique.
3. Dish out some crit for some other players!

Now, this doesn't have to be an all-out love meme. That's not why this is here. This is so we can all try to improve! That said, there's no need for flaming - what we want to see here is constructive criticism, if you please. If you've got a reason for why you think someone should do this or stop doing that, tell them! Just don't be an ass about it. If it gets to that, a mod will step in.

Anonymous commenting should be enabled for now, and IP logging should be off, if anyone wants to use it. Don't abuse the privilege, though, or it will be disabled in a heartbeat.

But hey, we're all friends here, right? So let's keep this civil and constructive, and let's all try to be better self-inserts for 2011. :)

Comments

[medrau.livejournal.com]

Me first? Sure why not.
Meddy the n00b here

[seolearo.livejournal.com]

I really like how you just dove right into it. We've had some issues with introducing new players, but I'm really glad to see someone get involved as quick as you did. Though we don't see you too often, it's not a problem since you've made your mark already, and even now you're looking into magic... it's just a nice change from the usual difficulties of bringing in someone new :>

[medrau.livejournal.com]

You did make it easy with that world hop. I don't know how I would've gotten off earth otherwise. Thanks though.

WRFM // The Mods // NPCs

[wrfm-mods.livejournal.com]

wrfinalmix // // wr_npc

If you've got any issues with how us mods are handling things, or with the game itself, feel free to tell us here. And keep in mind that we also have a Questions/Concerns/Feedback/Plot Idea post with screened comments here (http://wrfm-mods.livejournal.com/3767.html), if you're not comfortable talking to us in this post!

[medrau.livejournal.com]

I'll just do one for the game itself since I don't know everyone well enough to give personal critique.

It seems like you've got a really great game here, one that's survived a long time. I'm still a little confused about the plot right now. I can't tell where this is going unless we're just hanging out and dealing with whatever falls on our plates. It seems like we've got a lot of little baddies but nobody in charge. Of course for all I know that's part of the plan. I'm just used to knowing who the "Main Boss" in a story is or what the goal is.

Besides that, it's all cool. I like what's going on with the BBS trio and I love how well settled the refugees are on radiant garden. It's an interesting set-up.

Re: WRFM // The Mods // NPCs

[(Anonymous)]

Wah. Wah. I'm a troll and I hate everybody . . .

No, really, things seem to be speeding up again and that's all to the good. I'd like to get more of a taste of what the bad guys are actually up to and move forwards in that. More events might help with that, though it's hard to be sure.

This has always been a fun and entertaining game and a large part of the fun has always been the interactions among refugees. On the other hand, there is also a need for things that are bigger and more. I still have no idea what was happening with all of the cataclysmic events we were having some time ago, and how that relates to the current story.

As a whole, I'm pretty happy with the game at the moment.

[seolearo.livejournal.com]

GET OUT WE DON'T WANT YOU HERE.

No, seriously, I mentioned this in chat so idk if you were there or not, but... There was supposed to be a log doing just that? Hell, even that log with Koios and Maleficent was supposed to do that, but it got Paris'd and that is entirely my fault and I suck. Sorry. We're looking into picking back up some exposition posts, though, so hopefully those will be done and posted soon! I won't guarantee anything, because life can get in the way, but just know that we're working on it and will try to have it posted as soon as we can.

[nachtstar.livejournal.com]

Ari here.
And Kairi.
And Tifa.
And Yuna.

...y'know. When I'm not a failboat.

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[creepy-son-of-a.livejournal.com]

Aria
Seph

...Does Pancake count, 8D?

[fox_the_kitsune]

Just me, Roxas and Merlin.

[seolearo.livejournal.com]

Ray~

Also got Aerith (holylifestream) and King Mickey (le_king) and Selphie (deathbyjumprope; yeah I know she only showed up once shut up) over here. And Dominique if you want to get into crack, too >>

[rikugasmic.livejournal.com]

Rox - rox_chan

Riku - rikugasmic
Paine - xcrimsonwarrior
Ventus - windybonds

In before "Wait, we have a RIKU?".

[seolearo.livejournal.com]

Wait, we have a RIKU?

[seolearo.livejournal.com]

Seriously though, Riku and Mickey need to spend some time together. Their interactions are always great fun and really need to happen more.

[unlockingsmiles.livejournal.com]

[rikugasmic.livejournal.com]

But yes, I am in full agreement! Mickey always helps bring out my best Riku, so more of that needs to happen.

[belegwen.livejournal.com]

I play:

Mabry
Maleficent

[shaderic.livejournal.com]

Umm, I sent you an e-mail awhile ago regarding something. Did you get it?

[belegwen.livejournal.com]

I did not. Try again. Put MALEFICENT in the subject line to be sure I see it (I get tons of spam, so I might have missed it amid all the spam, but it could also be that my filter got it. If I don't get it by sundown tomorrow I'll contact you and we'll try contacting me another way.

My primary e-mail address is belegwen@hotmail.com. Is that the one you tried?

[belegwen.livejournal.com]

Still haven't received anything. And nothing was in my junkmail folder either, so if you're sending it to the right account we have a problem.

[shaderic.livejournal.com]

Sorry. I've been kinda busy. Expect it sometime later today.

[(Anonymous)]

Sent.

[seolearo.livejournal.com]

I love your Maleficent but you know that already so this isn't really anything new. I just wanted an excuse to ask you a question since you already logged off of AIM.

But yeah. Do you want to pick up on the Koios and Maleficent log? It never really got resolved (my fault, and again, I'm sorry), and like I said above, there could have been some key exposition and it could get some things moving. It's up to you, though; if you don't want to/can't, that's perfectly fine.

[belegwen.livejournal.com]

Sure. It's a good idea. I'll go check on that log and reread everything, and if it's my turn I'll make a post.

It was as much my fault as yours. I've been crazy distracted by all sorts of things lately.

[shaderic.livejournal.com]

Well, I'm Shaderic.

I'm gonna be playing a villain too, but I'm not quite sure when I should be introducing them. Properly, anyway.

[seolearo.livejournal.com]

I really appreciate all the contributions you've made to the game, even being one of the newer players. You joined and immediately started making plot suggestions, and that's awesome. And I'm really glad we got the chance to offer you a villain, too; can't wait to see how that works out. Speaking of, can us mods get an update on their status via email or something? /curious :O

Would like to see more of you, though, but I understand how it might be difficult to accomplish that. But now that you've got permission in-game to hang out with us, I'd like to see you do that some more!

[shaderic.livejournal.com]

Alright. I can post on my phone now, so hopefully I can get around my little handicap from before.

Regarding I just need word from Mabry about something, and then to cook up an account for them. After that, start playing Nightmare Fiction, cause that's gonna be 's theme until I come up with something better.

[shadowchaser.livejournal.com]

Amy

Jalen

Awiergan Bwahahaha.